Peer Assessment: Evaluation

Here is the feedback I received from a fellow student in my class based upon my evaluation posts. From looking at this I have learnt that I need to make a few posts a bit more super visual and I need to make clearer comparisons, referring to my digipack, advert and music video.  As well as this, looking at the positives, I have included a good depth of analysis and posts are clear of what is being illustrated. I will take this all on board when making the changes that I need to.